20110720

Condition

This post is a attempt to play on the word Condition - this word like many other words in the English dictionary has multiple meanings.

Original Thought:

After months of deliberation he finally decided to take a chance. Today both of them were staying back after work to work on a deadline. As only a few people were around, he calmed himself before entering her the cool cabin. Removing the newly polished family ring passed down through generations from his great grandmother, he held her smooth frail hand and professed his desire to marry her.

Taken aback by this show of love and the unexpected proposal even though she was waiting for it for the past one year, tears welled up in her eyes. Seeing her state he slowly ran his hand through her soft and smooth hair and pulled her to his strong shoulders. After the few moments of nerve wreaking silence she looked him in his eyes. With a slight nod and a smile she accepted his proposal.

From that day onward they lived every moment of their life happily together.
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Conditioned Thought:

Taking time he conditioned his mind to take a chance. Today both of them were staying back after work as they had a condition to be met. As only a few people were around, conditioned himself and entered her air conditioned cabin. Removing the newly conditioned family heirloom conditionally passed for generation from his great grandmother, he held her conditioned hand and professed his unconditional love for her.

Taken aback by the current condition of the moment even though she had conditioned herself for it for the past one year, her condition became emotional. Seeing her current condition he ran his hand through her conditioned hair and pulled her to his conditioned physique. After dwelling in the silent condition for a while, she looked him in his eyes. With a precondition lovers reaction she accepted his proposal.

From that day onward they conditioned their lives for a great future.
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Don't know if this post makes sense.
The concept is to see the our condition after reading a post aesthetically written vs technically narrated.

8 comments:

Hiren said...

not in a condition to comment .. will condition and bring myself in a condition to comment and come back but only on one condition that you will unconditionally agree to not put us in such a condition again ...

ceedy said...

@hiren

This condition will arise in the future when softwares will introduce and you conditionally approve Auto Thesaurus Check...

Mia said...

i am also in no condition to comment just like Hiren

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Hmm..jokes apart ,in reality there are many conditions in a life which do not allow us to enjoy life asit comes..conditions are many timesMUTUAL EXPECTATIONS which make life miserable..I guess my comment is as confusing as your post

ceedy said...

@mia

I understand the condition as I am still trying to figure out when and how I got this thought.

ceedy said...

@cu

I think CU you are saying that we approach life in a preconditioned way instead of simply acting on it as it comes - often leading to mental and emotional mess..

Compassion Unlimitted said...

yep , you got it spot on

☆ Rià ღ said...

Interesting read...and very well said.