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My Crush

After a long ardous wait for a month, I finally met her. It was last month that I first saw her when she was new here.
We met at a friends house at a dinner party. Initially shy and being around her parents she was reluctant to interact with me. It has been a while any girl has had so much impact on me. I have not been close to one for almost a year now. I was mesmerized by her bright eyes and cute smile and she melted my stubborn heart all over again.
I was not able to stay at their house long that evening as I had prior commitments. If I had known that I will meet such a cute girl who might brighten my dull life, I would have postponed my other appointments. But alas I had to leave.
After that evening I so wanted to see her again - so I called my friend to ask more about her. He was non-chalant and sensing my excitement was reluctant to divulge any more information. I coaxed him to arrange some gathering again at his place. He just said a half hearted . He told me that since they had just arrived , its better that they settle before meeting again.
A month passed and I did not have a chance to interact with her or her parents. What a spoilsport my friend was. Damn!!! I figured the only way to meet her was to talk to her parents directly. But was afraid. After my interlude with them I realized that they were very protective of her.
I could not let her go off my mind and kept feeling and was sure that behind the demure exterior is a mischievous girl. I really really wanted to meet her again. But how.....why on earth was my close friend being such a pest.....
Anyways to cut it short, finally last week my friend did call me to come over for dinner and said she and her parents were going to be there - I was delirious and gladly accepted the invitation.
So finally I saw her again and WOW she looked beautiful. Today I noticed her more closely. I had to be careful as her parents might get some ideas and get angry and I did not want to mess up this opportunity to spend some quality time with her.
As the evening progressed she became a bit bold and made lots of eye contacts with me. We both exchanged many glances and smiled at each other. It felt that she was interested in me but I am reluctant now to assume anything. Just want everything to be perfect this time.
After a long time I was having real fun and that too with a beauty. I had to pass her and her parents as they were seated on the sofa- on my way to the balcony where the BBQ was located. Never in my life have I forgotten so many items or taken one item at a time. Every chance I got to take a peek at that cute face I took and she too kept looking out for me. Was I getting crazy?
What was happening? Dunno but I liked the feeling.
As the evening progressed there was a certain comfort between her parents and me. Her mom showed a liking for me. After the dinner - my friend decided to play some slow music. Both of us being single I took it as a chance to get close to her. I had to do it for my sanity or else the way I was behaving I would have made someone or myself embarrased.
Inviting her to dance I took her slim waist in my arms and she rested her head on my shoulders. It was bliss. Every now and then at a beat we would steal glances. Those cute eyes that I was admiring for so long from far were right in front of my eyes. I wanted time to stand still and did not want this to end. It was surreal as to how things can suddenly change in ones life. I was dull and bored till yesterday and now am all excited.
I took this closeness as a chance to feel her soft skin, so I caressed her cheek and she smiled coyly and enjoyed it. Then I became bold and kissed her soft cheeks and forehead. It felt so good. Her eyes sparkled and I loved it. After a while of dancing she finally slept in my arms to the amazement of both her parents.
This cute little bundle of joy is none other than my very good friends' just born daughter....Kimaya (li'll kim for short) and we were dancing to the tunes of some nursery rhymes.....and yes she is my latest crush....I plan to spend many a good days with her....
And way things are going chances are I could be dancing with the future American President.

110 comments:

Cinderella. said...

LOL !!

Initially I was like this cant be a story cz its not the story blog.

BUt then gradually more into, I knew you were gonna bring up some michief in the end !!!!! And man you did !!

LOl !! Show us a pic of he lil angel can you ?

•♥•...๑۩۞۩๑♥V♥๑۩۞۩๑..•♥• said...

hehe

and i was thinking...lol

have to second miss cinderella.

what a way man..what a way..to make us all laugh.
:D :D

cheers man

Veens said...

i knew i knew :P

first i thought it had to be a CAR...then u mentionaed a girl..then i thought.. mebbe.. it is a small girl :D :D

then on that slim waist and kissing part .. i knew i knew.. it had to be a lil sweet kid... but i dint knw it was a New- born ..


ohh! it was such a sweet narration :)
i liked it :D

d SINNER!!! said...

well narrated...

but the twist :) was Expected!

brocasarea said...

what a twist man..i really believed it:(

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Twist seems to be order of the day..nice storyline
with this new crush dont kiss the older crushes bye bye..lol
tc
cu

Ankur said...

lag gaya tha.. kuch gadabd hai!! :P
waise mujhe pehle laga tha ki aap apnii nayi gaddi ki baat kar rahe ho!! :P
heheh

put up her pic!!

Suma said...

heh..heh... the hopeless romantic that i am, i must admit the title in the google reader brought me..but then i knew something was up...

cute...:D

Cess said...

OMG, I was reading, and keep reading, and I was thinking, is he talkin about him, who s that girl, what s gonna happen, and then almost at the end u said it was a very good friend, but i still believed it was adult we were talking about, and then a baby...so cute! Was nice reading it ;)

--xh-- said...

i know it will be a small girl, but my guess was around 4-5 yr old... :-D
but u made it so real, if i havnt read ur blogs for some time, i could have easily fell for it. :)

Hiren said...

Kimaya is a nice name ... and little kids are undoubtedly angelic ... their innocence is mesmerizing ... i have a kiddo cousin in london and whenever i meet her its just like bliss ... :)

Aaarti said...

hahahaha... we got way too much in common... :d [knew it.. 1st thot it was a car/bike, then when i read girl, knew it had to be a doggie or a baby] :)

last week i remember writing something similar with my Floppy and today you and lil kim!!!!

t was surreal as to how things can suddenly change in ones life. I was dull and bored till yesterday and now am all excited.- how true!!!!:)

But be careful haan..dont want to rush into anything, her parents mite get freaked out ;)

~nm said...

Somehow when I read the word "Cute" I could guess it must be a small kid you are talking about :)

Well written

singlendacity89 said...

CD????? I was so freaking excited for you.. I even had Happy tears in my eyes as I read about the dancing and all!! I am gonna KILL YOU!!! OMGOSH!!

I dont know what to say anymore! hahaha I am so gonna get ya tho!

I will laugh my way through work today, I know they are gonna think I am crazy!!!

Ne.

Scribblers Inc said...

really nice baba....ceedy bhai..daaaamn nice!!:D

Scribblers Inc.

P.S.what are those arrows in the blog list...my arrow isnt there..or did I shoot it???hmmm....

Vrij said...

Awesome posts CD! Too gud!

Buzzz said...

American President and a woman ? At max not possible untill Democrats turn Oba ma wo Oba woma.

fun apart a good twist and a good write up. are you for sure hooked into ?

Prats said...

You just know how to spin tales....grrrrr
And here I was, thinking, wow!!! Ceedy finally finds himself a girl...
BUt when?????
Is the exile over?

KP said...

good one :).

well written:).

I agree the way things are going who knows, she can definately be future president....lol:).

carolinagal said...

Haha...good one. I knew you were up to something in the end. I swear, I resisted so much to take a peek at the last few lines!!

Sahefa said...

I also expected that u were up to something

anna said...

Cute :)

"While we try to teach our children all about life, our children teach us WHAT LIFE IS ALL ABOUT.”

greetings from CA

Neeku said...

Okay i will be honest.. i read the first para and then last and then the whole thing... so ...

Khabar padi gai :)

Pan bo nicely written :)

Aradhana said...

Lovely..

:) Bust suspected the eventual ending when u mentioned things goin sooo right;)

The Paratrooper said...

LOL... I really thought this was a girl... i mean a ur age types... nice... lil kids are the cutest!!.. i lovee whn my neice is around too.. !

cheers!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

I knew there was something fishy! :P

So cute,could we see a pic please?

Cool,you gonna get invited to an Obama party? :)

An ILLuS|On said...

you almost got me..nice one;)

brocasarea said...

visit my blog ..u have a surprise !!:)

m.flowerr said...

hahaha...........liked your narration and the twist was little expected:0

aqua gurl said...

haha....very nicely written and put...i was expecting it to end somewhat differently...:D:D

Abhishek Khanna said...

2 times in between the post i looked up to check if it was ur shorts blog and its a story.. then i thot mayb ceedy bhai falling in love.. but .. end was too good buddy .. :)

Pavi!!!! said...

awwww..i can imagine how crushed u are...baby gurls are the ebst thing in this world :)

n nope u didn't have me thinking that u had a REAL crush:) sorry abt that!

R3d3MpTioN said...

mamu bana diya ..!!! he he awesum man ..

Keshi said...

I was hoping for a Wedding post but yeah lil Kimaya sure did steal ur heart ha? :) lovely post!

Keshi.

Abreysham said...

damn! what an ending!
GREAT start to a drab morning with a hint of sadness in the air. Glad I read your blog- as is mostly the case for some time now, this one TOTALLY made my morning!
would love to see the little angel :-)

Rakesh said...

good yaar..rush with ur crush:)

τ ħ€ ĐάЎđяёάmёя said...

oh my my....such a sweet description of such and angelic beauty...and m so sure ki bhai wo meri bhi crush toh ban hi jayegi...give her a kiss from me too ...

loved the post beyond anything

Prats said...

Hey...got something for u on my blog...come on over and collect it

Joy said...

i doubt you would ever write such a detail post on a girl you really fall for :) :)

Though I knew there is going to be twist I could not figure it would be a baby/kid!

I do hope you find your realy crush real soon, if not already.

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

are you a paedophile???

:P :P :P am really sorry for my sarcasm , i hope u take it as a joke . but it was a good post :) . i seriously thought that u kissed the girl in front of her parents !!!!
hehheheh

ceedy said...

@cinderella

haha - well nobody seems to believe me now I guess :)

I am in talks with the parents to see it they will allow me to post a pic...

ceedy said...

@v

glad you liked it...thanks man....

and hope you had a hearty laugh

ceedy said...

@veens


thanks....damn even you did not believe that I could have a crush :(

hahah - yeah its about a lill angel

ceedy said...

@d'sinner

well it sure was...

I will never write about a Real crush so publicly!

ceedy said...

@brocasarea

hahaha - kewl you enjoyed it

ceedy said...

@compassion unlimitted

well this new crush can only be met on weekends and that to not very often

drawbacks of american life - so dont worry the older crushes are here to stay :)

lol

ceedy said...

@ankur

haan - you also dont believe that I can have a crush...

I am in talks with the parents for a pic...

ceedy said...

@suma

haha - sorry to break your heart...not really...

I still was talking about an angel

ceedy said...

@cess

glad you enjoyed it and this surely was not a cliffhanger :)

ceedy said...

@-xh-

damn....even you did not beleive me :P

hahha - guess have to update my style.....

ceedy said...

@hiren

yup kids of all ages till they can bully you are fun...

I love to play pranks on them and vice versa :)

ceedy said...

@aaarti

hahah yes I am careful with the parent...dont want them to get any ideas

glad you enjoyed it

ceedy said...

@~nm

thanks and yeah I could not and did not want to call her anything but what she is CUTE

ceedy said...

@ne

ohooh - now I will surely tell you when I have a crush....so you can have real tears :)

will wait for your sweet revenge

and did people find you crazy???? LOL

ceedy said...

@scribblers inc

thanks bud...and I left a msg for u for the arrows

ceedy said...

@vrij

thanks :)

and I learnt that you too will have the "fun" and crush soon ;)

ceedy said...

@buzzz

hahaha

thanks man...yeah...it will only happen if like you say

ceedy said...

@prats

no the exile is not over...and there is no timeline...

ceedy is too confused ;) right now :P to find any girl...

enjoying simple singlehood...thats it

ceedy said...

@kp

thanks and yes...things are turning in all directions

so we might just have a woman president...some day

ceedy said...

@carolinagal

hahaha...glad you did not peek and enjoyed it...thanks :0

ceedy said...

@sahefa

heheh :)

ceedy said...

@anna

thanks....

yes true....

greetings from NJ

ceedy said...

@neeku

ohohoh...
well its fine...I guess you are impatient...

glad you enjoyed it

ceedy said...

@aradhana

hahhaha

so even you dont beleive I can have a crush :(

ceedy said...

@the paratropper

hehe
kewl how are things....enjoying???

ceedy said...

@sameera

hahah thanks....

I am in talks with the parents to allow me to post a pic...

yeah I wish...I can attend that party

ceedy said...

@an illusion

:) glad you liked it

ceedy said...

@ brocasarea

thanks for the surprise - it is posted here

ceedy said...

@m.flowerr

glad you liked it :)

ceedy said...

@aqua gurl
what were you expecting it to end as????

glad you liked it

ceedy said...

@abhishek khanna

hahhaa........

nah ceedy bhai is fine alone right now...glad you checked again and again :P

chalo kuch to kam kiya

ceedy said...

@pavi

yup babies like i say are great till they argue with you...then the size becomes unbearable...
damn so you think I can really have a REAL crush :(

damn damn.....no me worried ;)

ceedy said...

@redemption

hehhe thanks - glad you liked it

ceedy said...

@keshi
thanks...no bells and whistles for me...

its all for the lill angel:)

ceedy said...

@abreysham


:) glad I added a dash of sugar to your hint of sadness day instead of adding a pinch of salt....

I am in talks with the parents to put up a pic...

glad you enjoyed it....

ceedy said...

@rakesh

rush where mere yaar???

ceedy said...

@the day dreamer

haan sure...teri bhi crush ban jati...

I surely will give her a kiss from your side :)

glad you enjoyed it

ceedy said...

@prats

yeah saw it...thanks and its posted :)

ceedy said...

@joy

yes agree..if this was real it would never have been leaked out in public :)


well i sure hope to find my crush soon...and am single right now :)

thanks for the wishes....

ceedy said...

@i'll try 2 be truthful

nah...there are no sexual overtones....

so m not a paedophile :)

and dont worry about the sarcasm...you need to read my posts they are full of it...

glad you enjoyed it :)

ceedy said...
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Ziah said...

Hahahahaha.... you are capitalising on the fact are we are after all, a bunch of one-track minds!:) Nice one!:)

ceedy said...

@ziah

hahah....yes ;) glad you enjoyed it :)

Princess Mia said...

I thought yur gonna end it up by saying it was a dream.....but wow...taht was for real hahahaha

The Paratrooper said...

yup i am enjoying... :)... how are u doing sir ??

when is the real crush gonna be written about ?

The Paratrooper said...

when are u updating ur shorts blog..i really love the style of ur short stories... give me (us) new cliffhanger soon !

ceedy said...

@princess mia

hehe - no this is for REAL - no dream

ceedy said...

@the paratropper
good to hear from you...
I am doing fine.

And yes I know you like to read my stories....just updated one today....come and read it when you can.

Lakshmi said...

oh my god...this wasnt something I expected ...and thanks for the long comment in my post on houses..I like architecture and the information was amazing..thanks once again.I would like to invite you to read my 100th post..do drop in when free

Suma said...

hey...come collect your BFF badge from me...

gunj said...

boy oh boy!!
i totally thot u finally found ur lady love!!
good one thr!

ceedy said...

@lakshmi

hehe...

Glad you like the information on architecture.

I will read it right now...congrats on the 100th post

ceedy said...

@gunj

hahah...if I ever do...she wont be advertised for sure ;)

ceedy said...

@suma

thanks and I put it up on the sidebar

rantravereflect/ jane said...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. mannn sooo cute.. ive been away for sooo long, but this was worth the wait..
a lil' bundle of joy, n i didn't guess it for a second---> awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, soooo darnnnn cuteeee..
sooo what is her name???? n yeahhh, like a lotta requests already , do put up a pic!

ceedy said...

@jane

hehehe

thank you...her name is kimaya...last few lines of the post....

and will put up the pic once I have it...thanks

Pri said...

awww thats soo cute :D
sorry to dissapoint you but the first 5 lines and i knew it would be some kiddo cutopie around the block...
maybe i just know u wayy too well :)

and yess this side of you rocks!!

ceedy said...

@pri

damn it damn it ;)

thanks....very vulnerable it is this side :) so have to keep it in wraps...

Deepali said...

Oh man...

Like lots of people I thought this was a story, or that you were talking about an object and I kept reading and I was like whoa this seems real hehe but some how I think most people knew the end wouldn't be an actual woman hehe.

Oh but somewhere in the middle I also thought wow it seems that soon ceedy is going to write about getting engaged and married lol.

ceedy said...

@deepali

hehe....well nothing is in store at the moment...just some fun....

glad you liked it :)

Winnie the poohi said...

Funny! :)

This post needs her pic then :)

ceedy said...

@winnie

welcome here...

yes trying to get a good pic...

Meera said...

Hey...that was just so CUTE!!

Satish Bolla said...

am i intelligent? coz' i jus guessed what going to come in the final few sentences

ceedy said...

@meera

thanks...glad you liked it and welcome here

ceedy said...

@satish

maybe...or maybe you know me well ;)

Dipika said...

i ve visited ur blog for the first time. when i read this piece of writing i was like is it some second chetan bhagat :) well the first sentence came to mind after reading it was ' so shweet!'.

Vandita said...

so darn cute :)
i wish u had posted lil kim's pic too

ceedy said...

@dipika

thanks for the visit...and glad you liked this post

ceedy said...

@vandita

I have to go there and click lil kims pics...will post them as soon as I get them :)

and welcome here