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Me and Mrs. Muller-32 Days

Where is Mrs. Muller? Maria
She is dead. Taken aback I dropped the gift.
What do you mean she is dead

Hey Maria make a sandwich for Ceedy
And a coffee for me
I am feeling tired with all these painkillers


This is going to make her happy I thought
Tommorow I will gift it to her
I am happy to lighten her pain and suffering

I wish my kids were here today
Sam might come to meet me for New Years
I will be able to see him finally in a month.

She feels I am her son!!! going by the note
This digital photo frame will make her happy.
Maybe I can click pictures of Maria and café and gift it to her

I love this garlic shrimp: Maria you are a darling
Love to come here and meet everyone
Helps me forget my loneliness


The note read : Sorry young man
I fell in the bathroom yesterday, could not sit longer
See you Monday morning Son!!!

Ceedy is late today, maybe caught up at work – its Friday before the weekend.
I cant sit anymore, this pain is unbearable
Give this note to him Maria - See you all on Monday

17 comments:

Ashu said...

Couldnt gauge the meaning of the post...it was a Bret Lee bouncer to meeeee

Kalyan said...

lovely reading...Here's wishing u and ur dear ones also a wonderful year ahead...!

vitruvian said...

was this for real....??
it was very sad..touching...
nicely penned...
cheers!

KP said...

ceedy.....I second Ashu...I just totaly lost you?


A truly high level post for me....


Happy Newyear...:)

Apaksh said...

Hey ceedy nice post to end the year. Have some pity on poor people like me who visit your blog in anticipation of knowing what's next ceedy is up-to. I would suggest giving a very minuscule hint of things happening, in the story it will help somebody else who might be effected by the restlessness we have, have some peace of mind and really understand the meaning of this post.

phoenix said...

huh?
you lost me completely on this one!!!

anyways wishing you a very happy new year!

Preethi said...

Sort of got it and didn't. If someone is really dead, it is sad.

Happy New Year to you

Wanda said...

Thanks for stopping by my post today. I am a lover of Calvin and Hobbes too. I also get a kick out of the Far Side jokes.
It's always fun to meet a new blogger friend.

Jaggu said...

Hey...nice dream...when did you get this?...uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Is this reality or fiction?

Anyways,Happy New Year :)

Compassion Unlimitted said...

A neat one if my understanding is right !
Let 2008 be a brighter year for you
TC
CU

Anjuli said...

ceedy u need to break ur silence now, it was either a bouncer or a googly...u need to explain what!

neways...

Happy New Year!

Mel Avila Alarilla said...

Hi Ceedy,
Who is Mrs. Muller or Maria? Your post is very intriguing, or did you design it that way? Let me make a guess. Are you working as a caregiver and Maria or Mrs. Muller is your patient? Or is Mrs. Muller a family friend of yours whom you regularly visit? I must admit you leave us readers with our mouths agape as we could not make head or tails of your post. So many blind spots in it. One thing is definite though, Mrs. Muller or Maria is dead right? He, he, he, are you trying to become the new Perry Mason or Agatha Christie with your new thriller? Anyway, God bless and have the best incoming year of your life.

c e e d y said...

@all

Friends - to all who read this - beleive me I was not trying to confuse - just experimenting with a style of writing.

Have posted a detailed explanation in my new post :
http://ceedyreflections.blogspot.com/2008/01/honest-attempt.html

Thanks

--xh-- said...

i really thought it was real (and then i read ur next blog). man, u almost touched my heart with few words... great going :)

backpakker said...

Interesting style..Ive got it ..have read a few books during my college days on this style

I attempt a similar style, more in terms of past and present or the persona and the author clashes in some of my narratives .

annie said...

ahem ahem